Children can learn effectively through watching TV. Therefore children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly both at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

With the advanced technological tools, the use of

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has increasingly raised. In today, children use it to watch movies, documentaries, etc. Some people advocate that if our offsprings watch

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device they can learn so much new knowledge. I disagree with

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argument that these machines adversely affect kids' learning capacity and undermine their interests in the environment.

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and foremost,

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do lots of harm to younger ages, it turns them

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addicted since they spend most of their

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in front of it.

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, after they come back the

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many kids have a tendency to

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, but

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of

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attitude they can fulfil their homework and

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if their parents let them, they can watch the displays. Even though some people still are of the opinion that these products should be used at

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, as well. During the pandemic we have seen that learning from computers or

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only made the situation worse,

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, if we encourage teachers to allow our offspring to watch

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device during

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, they won't see any restriction to access it.

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devices can provide convenient displays,

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as documentaries and kids can increase learning capacity, but ,

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can not be efficient on

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own.

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to that, They will utilize

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it not only by learning documentarys' knowledge

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spend too much

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watching unnecessary things.

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, spending an excessive amount of

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on

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prevents them from hanging around, reading a book, making a sport and doing other different useful activities. Sitting in front of it at long hours poses a serious threat to health in the long term. Having spent so much date at faculty they expose to sit and afterwards, if they insist to retain it they start to turn into a habit after a few years these heirs become more likely to struggle with diseases. Except for physical

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they don't pick out to meet friends or play a game with peers in order to don't leave the scene.

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problematic situation leads them to effect in a psychological way. The more remote from their peers the more they stay alone. To sum up,

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's adverse challenges on our heirs is a force to be reckoned with.

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of encouraging teachers or managers to enable students to watch it at

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, we should take precautions at home in order to prevent their access to it so that they can learn from their environments,

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as educators or families and they can save much more

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to meet their friends or whomever they want and can do more beneficial activities.