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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should be more suspicious of their benefits?

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The two pictures compare the layout of the town of Lynnfield in 1936 and 2007. Overall, the most noticeable change is that a great part was allocated to residential use.
Furthermore
, administrative buildings were replaced by
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recreational
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Although
 Lynnfield had more natural areas in 1936, it provided more facilities in 2007. The northeast area that just had a river crossing there, occupied with the large domestic buildings. The other difference which can be seen in the pictures is a road replacing old cycle path, in 2007.
In addition
, two new recreational facilities were added to the town. The farmland in the1 southeast is turned into a golf course, and
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 the administrative offices located nearby is replaced by a museum. The
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 of the town did not change a lot. Individual stores just merged, and generally, the shopping area expanded in 2007. Despite the flower shop in
this
 area which is changed to a travel agent, the post office, bank and library remained in their places.
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