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The two pictures compare the layout of the town of Lynnfield in 1936 and 2007. Overall, the most noticeable change is that a great part was allocated to residential use.
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, administrative buildings were replaced by
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Lynnfield had more natural areas in 1936, it provided more facilities in 2007. The northeast area that just had a river crossing there, occupied with the large domestic buildings. The other difference which can be seen in the pictures is a road replacing old cycle path, in 2007.
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, two new recreational facilities were added to the town. The farmland in the1 southeast is turned into a golf course, and
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the administrative offices located nearby is replaced by a museum. The
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of the town did not change a lot. Individual stores just merged, and generally, the shopping area expanded in 2007. Despite the flower shop in
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area which is changed to a travel agent, the post office, bank and library remained in their places.
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