A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, • explain what you would like to talk about • say why students would be interested in your job • suggest a possible date and time for the talk
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing you
this
letter to get your attention, becouse
I would like to offer myself to speak in front of the students regarding my job, as I Correct your spelling
because
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you are looking for people that already have experience in Correct your spelling
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.
First
of all
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work
in the hair industry as a barber/hairdresser, and I would like to explain and share my expirience
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experience
thoughout
the years of Correct your spelling
throughout
work
with the students. if possible I would like to tell them also
the stress and rewards the job can give them, so they can be ready for anything.
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I would like to create some Replace the word
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interest
regading
some reasons, because it can be really creative, Correct your spelling
regarding
for example
, the use of colours and different style can be combinate with it, and also
bring some of my work
to show them how cool and funky they can be.
I also
would like to suggest a time if possible and it can be during the week as I know is where the whole students are in school possibly on a monday
morning, is where hairdressers have their days off.
I hope you will consider my offer, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite