nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. this trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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nowadays mainly choose to live independently or live with intimates,

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of living with their parents. While the tendency gives young people self-sufficient and unattached life, I still believe that

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increasing trend can cause some dire problems and negative consequences. There are several drawbacks of living in solitary that should not be underestimated. One major negative of

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living with friends or alone may cause depravity and lack of control which can negatively affect their life. The youngsters without parental control can easily be lured to use stimulants because there will be no regulatory body present to stop them from doing that.

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, most teenagers are not aware of the harmful effects of drugs, and they unknowingly need someone to warn them about these kinds of things.

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, living alone may increase

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loneliness which leads young people to

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without a plan and not

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care of themselves. At the same time, I believe that people who leave the protection from parents when they are too used to the family's care will find it difficult to integrate into society as well as perform independent jobs. Some cannot manage themselves leading to bad situations as mentioned above.

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, statistical data collected from all over the globe has shown that 60

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of the substance abusers are those who live alone or cannot orient themselves.