It is often said that the government spends too much money on the projects of protecting wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important.

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Some people believed government allocate vast sums of money on wildlife issue project. In my opinion, spending money on
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() is very important for maintaining a balance on environment and government should do it. Ecosystem sustainability depends on the proper interaction of humans with wildlife, so it is necessary for governments to protect wild animals and maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth. Some animals may become extinct if the governments do not pay and allocate
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a budget
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for it. Their observations have shown that the extinction of a species of animals in a geographical area even causes natural disasters.
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, not spending money on animal care causes hunters to hunt uncontrollably. So, the ecosystem of the hunted part is destroyed and floods and vortices occur.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wildlife conservation
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystem
  • Human welfare
  • Poverty alleviation
  • Resource allocation
  • Cost-benefit analysis
  • Non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
  • Ecotourism
  • Sustainable development
  • Preservation
  • Endangered species
  • Habitat destruction
  • Climate change
  • Environmental stewardship
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