You are organising a seminar for your company. Write a letter to the manager of another department inviting them to give a presentation at the seminar. In your letter: • give details of the seminar • invite them to give a presentation and say why you are inviting them • say what the presentation should be about.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to invite you to give a presentation on quality standards of manufacturing unit to all the employees working in the manufacturing department. The manufacturing department of our company is organising a seminar. In

this

,seminar all manufacturing concerned departments will do presentations related to their field

such

as health and safety, maintenance and inspection department. We are requesting you to give a brief presentation related to the manufacturing process. Kindly include the base surface casting checklist and the importance of the inspection procedure. We all would like to get your vision and guidance through

this

presentation as you are the Inspection manager of our company. We are sure that we will learn so much from your 39 years of experience in

this

company.

Moreover

this

seminar venue is on coming Saturday at Hotel Lavander, Sector 34, Chandigarh. The invitation card is attached to

this

letter. Hope you will accept our request. Thank You Yours sincerely, Harpreet Sangha

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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