Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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management. We are living in an era in which technology and communication walk
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communication that can reach
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society. A portion of the society may be engaged with print and prerecorded electronic
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other portion is too much habituated with mainstream social
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platform
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nowadays. If we look carefully we can find product or service advertisings in every portion or platform that are related to our
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companies or organizations are making
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to somehow connect with their end consumers regularly.
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sales purposes as well social responsibility purposes. Most of the time organizations become able to make their desired
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awareness
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through these
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social
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platforms like Facebook, Instagram etc. more than engaging with mainstream
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like TV, newspaper etc. Many
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think that we are no longer paying attention to these
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anymore as we get daily news and
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of updates from social
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faster than we get from TV, radio or newspaper.
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some
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think that these
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still productive effects to make
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awareness
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among us.
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I think still advertisement system has productive effects on our
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to
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life
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. Like, many of our aged family persons still don’t use social
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at all. They watch TV, read
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a newspaper
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newspaper
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or listen to radio stations and for
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advertising
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deliver clear images of that
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life
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we have
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role
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or personalities too. Organizations are using them to create positive
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towards end consumers and its working positively.
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of social problems and complications around us and companies are making social
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advertisements
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to deliver positive
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to customers. If we talk about
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Covid-19 pandemic situation, we have already seen that how brands were spreading their positive
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through social and electronic
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campaigns. Nowadays governments are
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doing social campaigns to make
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understand
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things through
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advertisements
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. In conclusion, I think
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still
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our
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to
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life
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. It is making us not only aware but
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bringing positive
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every time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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