Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertising is one of the processes of
brand
management. We are living in an era in which technology and communication walk
hand
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hand
. Advertising is
such
a
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communication that can reach
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society. A portion of the society may be engaged with print and prerecorded electronic
media
just
where as
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other portion is too much habituated with mainstream social
media
platform
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platforms
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nowadays. If we look carefully we can find product or service advertisings in every portion or platform that are related to our
life
.
Basically
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companies or organizations are making
advertisement
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advertisements
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to somehow connect with their end consumers regularly.
This
process of connecting can be
on
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sales purposes as well social responsibility purposes. Most of the time organizations become able to make their desired
brand
awareness
through these
advertisements
. As we said it’s an era of technology and communication
hand
by
hand
, nowadays most
people
are confined
with
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social
media
platforms like Facebook, Instagram etc. more than engaging with mainstream
media
like TV, newspaper etc. Many
people
think that we are no longer paying attention to these
advertisements
anymore as we get daily news and
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of updates from social
media
faster than we get from TV, radio or newspaper.
On the other
hand
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some
people
think that these
advertisements
has
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still productive effects to make
brand
awareness
among us.
Personally
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I think still advertisement system has productive effects on our
day
to
day
life
. Like, many of our aged family persons still don’t use social
media
platform
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at all. They watch TV, read
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a newspaper
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newspaper
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or listen to radio stations and for
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them
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advertising
messages
deliver clear images of that
brand
. In our social
life
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we have
social
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role
model
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models
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or personalities too. Organizations are using them to create positive
awareness
towards end consumers and its working positively.
Besides
this
, we do have
lot
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of social problems and complications around us and companies are making social
awareness
advertisements
to deliver positive
messages
to customers. If we talk about
this
Covid-19 pandemic situation, we have already seen that how brands were spreading their positive
messages
through social and electronic
media
campaigns. Nowadays governments are
also
doing social campaigns to make
people
understand
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things through
advertisement
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advertisements
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. In conclusion, I think
advertisements
has
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still
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to
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our
day
to
day
life
. It is making us not only aware but
also
bringing positive
messages
every time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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