Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Opinions are divided on whether humans who enter the career market soon and keep dedication to
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are more likely to get a pleasing working life than those who
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in different positions. I strongly agree with
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idea because they definitely have a defined career path and get a high promotion. It is a well-known fact that joining businesses early can
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people
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accumulate experiences and gain
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satisfactions
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leads to keep doing
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. As the matter of fact, the more time they spend, the more potential customers they will get.
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brings them a lot of benefits not only in making money but
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in increasing
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productivities. In Vietnam,
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, many young
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have started their businesses immediately after graduating from university and quickly made a name for themselves.
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, it is important for
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to engage in the
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market as soon as possible.
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,
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who find employment early are more likely to have
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, after a while
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, they will sharpen their skills and abilities, which means they can receive a better promotion or even play a leadership role. In
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, they may have a
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to enter international markets that will
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them a lot.
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who stay in one field can learn from their mistakes, enhance productivity and move up the career ladder.
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, having
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early
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is vital. In conclusion, I believe that
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who choose a
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early and keep doing it will advance quickly and be happier than those who frequently change jobs.
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statement seems very rational.
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