Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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Nowadays,
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suffer from thinking distraction. I think
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is mainly because of more
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and studying some
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which are
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not optional. There exist quite a few reasons why
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have attention
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at school. The
first
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reason could be mentioned that school
children
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spend most of their time in front of
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and it is trouble for them.
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, according to comprehensive research, if a teenager
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to
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lesson
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over
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an hour,
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it will create some hardship for paying attention
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classroom
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.
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, if the
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are chosen by teachers and schools the
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can be reluctant to study these types of
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.
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, a child has a desire to read a history book,
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this
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person is forced to study math,
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, there will be bad situations
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as low points, failed from exams. A possible solution to improve their attention is that the number of lessons should decrease and
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they will be more
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affective
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at education
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, if the child is studied three
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and other three
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which are part of their school schedule, they can spend at
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or hectic some activities
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as art, games, clubs. The more useful
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are studied, the more successful
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will be. Another solving way could be the selecting
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children
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themselves.
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, if
children
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are accustomed to
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technical skills
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as math, chemistry and physic so that they should be taught these kinds of
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. These would definitely bring more
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to become more conscious at schools and
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concentration
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. In conclusion, in destroying focus the compulsory
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and heavy
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hours
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have several drawbacks.
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, these problems can be dealt with if
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are optional and
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the number of
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hours
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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