Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays,
children
suffer from thinking distraction. I think
this
is mainly because of more
lesson
hours
and studying some
subjects
which are
compulsory
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not optional. There exist quite a few reasons why
children
have attention
problem
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at school. The
first
reason could be mentioned that school
children
spend most of their time in front of
desk
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and it is trouble for them.
For example
, according to comprehensive research, if a teenager
listen
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to
lesson
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over
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an hour,
as a
result
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it will create some hardship for paying attention
at
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classroom
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.
In addition
, if the
subjects
are chosen by teachers and schools the
children
can be reluctant to study these types of
subjects
.
For instance
, a child has a desire to read a history book,
nevertheless
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this
person is forced to study math,
consequently
, there will be bad situations
such
as low points, failed from exams. A possible solution to improve their attention is that the number of lessons should decrease and
thus
they will be more
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affective
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at education
centers
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.
For instance
, if the child is studied three
hours
and other three
hours
which are part of their school schedule, they can spend at
playground
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or hectic some activities
such
as art, games, clubs. The more useful
hours
are studied, the more successful
children
will be. Another solving way could be the selecting
subjects
children
themselves.
For example
, if
children
are accustomed to
study
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technical skills
such
as math, chemistry and physic so that they should be taught these kinds of
subjects
. These would definitely bring more
patience
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to become more conscious at schools and
solving
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concentration
problem
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. In conclusion, in destroying focus the compulsory
subjects
and heavy
lesson
hours
have several drawbacks.
However
, these problems can be dealt with if
subjects
are optional and
reducing
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the number of
lesson
hours
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentration
  • attention span
  • distractions
  • technology
  • boredom
  • tiredness
  • engagement
  • learning disabilities
  • teaching techniques
  • classroom size
  • family issues
  • health problems
  • motivational strategies
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