Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays,
children
suffer from thinking distraction. I think this
is mainly because of more lesson
hours
and studying some subjects
which are compulsory
not optional.
There exist quite a few reasons why Add the comma(s)
,compulsory
children
have attention problem
at school. The Fix the agreement mistake
problems
first
reason could be mentioned that school children
spend most of their time in front of desk
and it is trouble for them. Add an article
the desk
a desk
For example
, according to comprehensive research, if a teenager listen
to Change the verb form
listens
lesson
Correct article usage
a lesson
over
an hour, Change preposition
for over
as a
result
it will create some hardship for paying attention Add the comma(s)
,result
at
Change preposition
in
classroom
. Add an article
the classroom
In addition
, if the subjects
are chosen by teachers and schools the children
can be reluctant to study these types of subjects
. For instance
, a child has a desire to read a history book, nevertheless
Add a comma
,nevertheless
this
person is forced to study math, consequently
, there will be bad situations such
as low points, failed from exams.
A possible solution to improve their attention is that the number of lessons should decrease and thus
they will be more Correct your spelling
effective
affective
at education Correct your spelling
effective
centers
. Change the spelling
centres
For instance
, if the child is studied three hours
and other three hours
which are part of their school schedule, they can spend at playground
or hectic some activities Add an article
the playground
a playground
such
as art, games, clubs. The more useful hours
are studied, the more successful children
will be. Another solving way could be the selecting subjects
children
themselves. For example
, if children
are accustomed to study
technical skills Change the verb form
studying
such
as math, chemistry and physic so that they should be taught these kinds of subjects
. These would definitely bring more patience
to become more conscious at schools and Replace the word
patients
solving
concentration Wrong verb form
solve
problem
.
In conclusion, in destroying focus the compulsory Fix the agreement mistake
problems
subjects
and heavy lesson
hours
have several drawbacks. However
, these problems can be dealt with if subjects
are optional and reducing
the number of Wrong verb form
reduce
lesson
hours
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