Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While some people argue that additional activities
besides
classes
such
as charity, neighbourhood improvement, or appreciation must be a mandatory part of the high school programme, others disagree with
this
statement. I tend to agree with the
first
argument. In
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I will discuss why I agree with
this
statement. I believe that school is not just about learning science lessons. In my opinion, schools should not only teach lessons in math, physics, etc., but schools
also
need to teach
life
skills.
For example
, "Relationship between parents and children", "Respect for the elderly", "How can addiction destroy your
life
?" or something like that.
Also
, I think
this
will be helpful for students going through puberty. The
second
reason why it is very important is to correct students' worldview and behaviour. Some students are given the wrong direction for their
life
by their parents or peers.
For example
, the wrong direction of religion or addiction.
Besides
, nowadays some teenagers suffer from depression. In the
last
ten years, the suicide rate among teenagers has increased a lot. In my opinion,
this
is because many teenagers do not have a comprehensive worldview and are not satisfied with what they already have. The extra classes can show poor countries and people that they have everything they need and that they have a better
life
. These solutions can lead to good deeds. In conclusion, tutoring is a very important part of the education system today. In some parts of the world, tutoring overtakes some classes by its benefits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • high school programmes
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • improving the neighbourhood
  • teaching sports
  • sense of responsibility
  • empathy
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • college applications
  • job applications
  • positive impact
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