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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.

#businesses #emphasise #products
Advertising became an integral part of our life. And most
of
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modern
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 companies use ads to underline the uniqueness of their
products
. It happens because businesses are fighting for every client and customer, and an unusual product is the only possible way to attract their attention. Personally, I tend to think it is a positive development
,
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 because that helps consumers to get the best of the best
merchandises
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. Markets of most of
goods
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 are saturated. It means that there are
thousands
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 different types of
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products
, and people are free to choose any of them. If there were no customers, the companies would have no revenue.
Thus
, businesses have to create something new and unusual to grab as many clients as possible.
For example
, we can see how Apple and Samsung have been competing with each other for many years. Every year, during their presentations of new
products
, people all over the world are comparing brand new
IPhones
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iPhones
 with incredibly modern Smartphones. And there is no winner in
this
 race for now
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 because both companies are developing something new annually. Despite some
argues
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, I believe that
such
 phenomenon is a great opportunity for customers to get the most qualitative and modern goods.
For instance
, due to the competition between producers of technic, especially phones, in past few years our smartphones got face scanners, fingerprint protection, possibility to pay with one simple touch,
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great quality of cameras, that can be compared even with a professional photo camera and many other functions and facilities. In conclusion, doing business is useless and unprofitable, if you do not have any clients. And one of the easiest
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 to get more consumers is
developing
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of
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brand new goods. Of course, mass production might
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irresponsible
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 towards ecology.
Nevertheless
, it allows people to obtain the most modern and the best possible
products
.
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