Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that preserving wildlife is so critical. People hold different views as to whether all wild
animals
should be protected or just some of them. In my opinion, all kinds of
animals'
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species should be protected. On the one hand, some people think we should solely save the lives of
animals
that may be endangered very soon.
This
could be because of the fact that preserving some of the wild
animals
would need less amount of effort and expense
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than saving the whole creatures in nature.
Moreover
, providing
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force
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responsible for protecting all
animals
might be impossible somehow. Take
for example
Asian Cheetahs, which are about to become endangered in Iran. If the government dedicated all of its energy and money to
this
species, the risk of Asian Cheetahs being endangered would be mitigated very soon.
On the other hand
, I would argue that it is our responsibility to preserve the wildlife habitat of all kinds of
animals
, no matter how hard and tedious it would be for both people and
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.
In other words
, we should respect the lives of all
animals
. By paying enough attention to different
animals
, which can be done through strategies
such
as establishing zoos, saving them from predators and so forth, we would be able to prevent ecosystems from becoming destroyed.
To sum up
,
while
it is thought by some that we should spend our money and time on saving special types of creatures, I am convinced that all
animals
need to be preserved.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural habitats
  • ecological balance
  • biodiversity
  • confinement
  • natural stimuli
  • psychological problems
  • genetic homogeneity
  • environmental changes
  • adapt and evolve
  • survival of the fittest
  • social structures
  • communication patterns
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