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Every country should have a free-health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely believed that free health care system is supposed to be available for everybody, even if it does not guarantee access to expensive medicines and modern methods of treatment. I tend to agree with the concept
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 everyone deserves the right to live healthy life regardless of their economic or social status. According to statistics, many patients all over the world fail to get any kind of medical service at all because they just cannot afford it. Age, household income, and personal circumstances play a deciding role
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 to pay full price. Assuming that every government’s core function is to meet the needs of
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, it would make sense to fund the provision of healthcare services by means of public health facilities or mandatory health insurance.
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, Germany has implemented the Insurance law, which obliges companies to save a certain portion of salary from the workers in
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 fund.
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such
 a strategy. Apparently, free healthcare can degrade the quality of service and make
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 impossible to provide access to high-quality and costly technologies of treatment.
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, some patients with non-chronic and rare diseases could face problems while seeking ways and means of cure.
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, children in Russia with SMA (spinal muscular atrophy) disease are dying without almost any chance to stay alive, just because
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 is refusing to pay two million euros per one injection, which saves
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 100%. To conclude, I believe that social wellness programs provided by governments should exist and ensure
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 level of medical therapy for every citizen from any background at little or no cost.
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 the latest approaches and technologies could remain payable or partly subsidized by
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the state
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