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With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the past,
kids
 used to play outdoor games in their free time, which indeed used to keep the kid active physically and mentally, but in today's time, social media and easy
internet
access
 have taken place of outdoor playtime of the
kids
 and diverting their childhood to the dangerous and mature
content
 available on the
internet
 these days.
Hence
, I strongly agree with the point that we should limit
access
 to the
internet
 for our children. Low
internet
 cost, attractive network plans and high availability of mobile
network
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networks
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 have increased easy
access
 to the
internet
 almost everywhere and to everyone. The smartphones available in the market at a very low cost is making them even more affordable and accessible. Now are days
kids
 are finding social media
websites
 and networking sites more attractive because of the irrelevant and inappropriate
content
 available on the
internet
 , which sometimes can put
kids
 in
a dangerous situations
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dangerous situations
a dangerous situation
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. Various gaming apps like pubg etc. are having violent
content
, which leaves a very bad impact on youngsters minds and
making
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makes
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 them violent. In my opinion, we cannot stop people or the
websites
 owner to publish irrelevant
content
 on their
websites
 and social networking sites, but can definitely stop our
kids
 to have limited
access
 or only have
access
 to age-appropriate
content
. We can have child-lock on various apps on our phones and can educate them to understand good or bad
content
 available on
websites
.
Also
 can make them understand the consequences of having
access
 to irrelevant
content
 and can encourage our
kids
 to go out for outdoor games,
instead
 of giving them smartphones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous situations
  • limit access to the internet
  • inappropriate content
  • online predators
  • physical and mental health
  • monitoring and guiding
  • online safety
  • school curriculum
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