The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell • what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff • how you feel about it • what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

Dear Sir or Madam,

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letter is being written in regards to the problems faced by staff of not having cafeteria and would like to

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request setting up a cafeteria for the staff in the office.

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few years, our staff is facing numerous problems of not having

canteen

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in the office.

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, they have to eat cold meals during

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office hours.

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, there is no availability of coffee or tea. Employees are forced to eat cold food, it ultimately resulted in their bad health and

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for

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in the work. Being a senior assistant, I incredibly feel bad for them. Because they are working

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for our company's success and

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facilities should be provided to them. I would like to give

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suggestions for setting up a canteen. As you already know that our company's top floor is completely vacant. It has many windows which will provide good ventilation.

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floor is extremely suitable for

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. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. Hoping for a positive response from your side regarding

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matter. Yours faithfully, Manvir Kaur.