Some people think that information outlets nowadays have sensationalized and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is undeniable that entertainment and media have been an integral part of modern culture.
People
's
life
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are
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under the influence of
news
channels and social platforms.
Consequently
, one viewpoint suggests that the development is detrimental to
people
's
life
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, whereas other
people
oppose
such
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and argue that the change is positive. Personally, I only partially believe both sides, and
this
essay aims to discuss both views and to elaborate my opinion regarding the topic. The impacts of
news
programs and online platforms
such
as Facebook or Reddit can be harmful to the daily
life
of
people
.
Firstly
, to start off, authoritarian intervention into
news
networks can spread misinformation that
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the ruling regime.
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possibility is morally wrong, as no one should be deprived
access
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to correct, scientific
knowledge
. While it is true that
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is considered extreme, it has already happened in modern China. Due to the funding of the central government into broadcasting companies and stations, the ruling party can spread
information
such
as the good side of the country to
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nationalism, while hiding matters
such
as the lack of funding for companies or the mistreatment of ethnic
minority
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minorities
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in the northern areas.
Moreover
, the daily
life
of citizens can
also
be affected through
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misinformation about health and science. In America, where
people
can search for "scientific" studies which are not correct but rather suit their opinion, groups
such
as
antivaxxers
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anti-vaxxers
and flat earthers exist because there
are
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information
on
news
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broadcast and the
Internet
that sustain these groups.
Conversely
, many
people
would argue that today
news
channels and media can provide
people
with beneficial
knowledge
and educate
people
about unknown matters.
First
and foremost, the availability of the
Internet
, or rather the
knowledge
on the
Internet
, is staggering. There are thousands of documents about every
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imaginable
to
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scientific fields
such
as physics or biology to
creative
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industry including art, literature, and music. The vast quantity of
information
people
can study from the
Internet
is one of the many benefits digitalization can bring.
Furthermore
, with the globalization process comes the requirements for
knowledge
about international events.
Therefore
,
news
channels on TV or on the
Internet
can be advantageous as they provide
information
to the public. Personally, I firmly believe that while modern
information
outlets can provide free
information
and
latest
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new
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around the globe, they are
also
a platform for misinformation and political purposes. The importance of free speech is undeniably essential, the severity of spreading false
information
cannot be forgotten and should be judged correctly.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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