The problem with society today is that it is essentially unbalanced, with some people being paid huge salaries to work very long hours, whilst others do not have a job and have too much time on their hands. There is no middle ground. Do you agree or disagree?

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to employment and salary is a very concerning topic in many countries. It has been argued that there is no balance between individuals who get well-paid by working extended hours, while others are jobless and have too much wasted time. From my perspective, I strongly agree with

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statement and my personal opinion will be expatiated through

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essay.

First

of all, huge

salary

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commonly

require

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candidates who pursue long-term education and have wide knowledge along with backgrounds in a specific field.

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can be seen in the case of doctors. It takes them a huge number of years to study and

as a result

, in developed countries, medical workers receive high salaries.

On the other hand

, not everyone can afford quality education. Since

then

, these individuals might lack the necessary knowledge to get a well-paid career.

For instance

, you do not need any special skills or work experience to become a food service worker, but

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job does not allow us to live a fulfilling life.

On the other hand

, after people gain something, they tend to not

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with what they already had. As a consequence, they will work harder to get improvement and try to gain more extra wages.

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can explain why

wealthy-individuals

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still tend to lengthen their working hours and get richer. Yet,

this

will lead to a decrease in people's opportunities to get a job.

Thus

, society is unfair, with the rich getting richer, and the poor getting poorer. I argue that salary levels should be framed by the governments.

Moreover

, limiting high salaries would bring more equality in the community. To sum up, I endorse the statement. In the future, if the government does not have appropriate policies, the problem will not be worked out, and may even become worse