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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Today there are more marketing campaigns of different companies and manufacturers
which
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that
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 focus the attention of consumers that their
product
 is new on the market. There are many different reasons for
this
, but I assume that it is the struggle for the buyer’s attention and the growth of
product
 sales. From my point of view, it is a positive
development
. One of the main reasons for
such
behavior
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 is the competition of various manufacturers for the buyer to choose
this
 particular company and not another. Thanks to the
development
 of a
product
 or
creation
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the creation
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 of a new one, which the businesses present in their advertising, they increase sales. The higher the sales are, the higher their profits are because consumers are interested in acquiring something new, unusual, and perfect for a period of time. The novelty of a
product
 mentioned in the advertisement obligates companies to actually create something unique, something that has not been existed until now. I think
this
 is a positive
development
. To create something new businesses invest a lot of money in the study and
development
 of the
product
 as a consequence the science develops, new discoveries occur, unexpected inventions appear, or old ones are improved. The invention of something new gives an impetus to the
development
 of mankind.
For instance
, the appearance of the
first
 iPhone on the phone market.
This
product
 was completely new and
therefore
 the company had a huge success and still has thanks to
it
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 ingenuity. To sum up, emphasising the novelty of the
product
 in
an
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advertising, business
attract
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attracts
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 the attention of customers. It has a positive
development
 as
such
behavior
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behaviour
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 of companies provide advancement of technology that makes people's lives better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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