Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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Nowadays, many
people
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opt to live in an
apartment
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rather than living in a
house
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. Because the
apartment
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is relatively safe and convenient.
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, others believe that a
house
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is more place and multiple rooms. Clearly, living in an
apartment
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has more benefits than drawbacks. The
first
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point I would like to make is that living in an
apartment
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is more convenient. Most of the
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apartment
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apartments
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provide facilities
such
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as a gym, swimming pool and sauna room. There will
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be many supermarkets, restaurants and stations
near by
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an
apartment
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,
people
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can do many things without spending too much time, these
brings
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many benefits to
people
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getting around .
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, it could be suggested that a
house
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has
large
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size and provide privacy. Living in a
house
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,
people
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can enjoy more privacy and space.
people
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can buy more
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furniture
furnitures
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furniture
types of furniture
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to decorate their home, and can even buy some fitness equipment to do exercise. But, there are many other ways to do exercise and enjoy free time,
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as park and
green way
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. Another important issue is that living in an
apartment
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people
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may feel
more safe
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. Because many apartments provide access inside the main building with an access card, which is only issued to the
people
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who live in an
apartment
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. All residents can watch out for any unidentified or unfamiliar person to
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apartments safer. So, there is no doubt that living in an
apartment
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has many benefits,
because
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convenience and safety. It provides
people
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with a more reassuring living experience, which is
good
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choice for many
people
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • privacy
  • outdoor activities
  • gardening
  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
  • security features
  • gated entries
  • surveillance systems
  • shared amenities
  • community centers
  • suburban
  • rural areas
  • commutes
  • urban centers
  • public transport
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