Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays there are some people
prefer
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who prefer
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to do part-time
jobs
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rather than full-time
jobs
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. Some people think that it affects positively, whereas others believe that it is not good for the future. I partially agree with having temporary work. Obviously, there are many reasons why I think it is
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idea.
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, we work hard to do what we really want. Employees who have whether temporary or permanent
jobs
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work to enjoy the
rest
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time.
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, it is sometimes difficult for workers in a company to
rest
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completely without holidays.
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, it can be better to have part-time
jobs
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and use the
rest
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of
time
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the time
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to do what they want.
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, they can research during using the
rest
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of
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months
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the months
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. There are many people who wonder what they want to do surely.
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, if someone has
temporary
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a temporary
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job
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for
few
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a few
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months
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and use
rest
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months
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for discovering one’s hidden talents and future dream
job
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, they will consider
job
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opportunities about what they want.
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, there are
also
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demerits of having temporary
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.
First
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of all, it can be hard when emergency situations appear.
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, if emergency circumstances
such
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as sickness, financial problems or accidents occur, they may borrow
loan
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a loan
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from a bank.
Besides
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, almost
workers
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all workers
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who have part-time
jobs
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earn less money than full-time
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employees.
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, it will be
also
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hard to save
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a deposit
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deposit
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deposits
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.
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, temporary working is unsafety. Workers can be fired whenever and the quantity of income can be changed according to employers and each
years
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year
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. In conclusion,
although
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having temporary
jobs
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for
few
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a few
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months
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and
use
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using
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the
rest
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time for doing activities what they want can be better, it will be hard for emergency situations and not safe for the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • pursue
  • self-development
  • life satisfaction
  • balance
  • job security
  • financial instability
  • stress and anxiety
  • unemployment
  • long-term financial commitments
  • diverse experiences
  • employability
  • broader perspective
  • adaptable
  • innovative
  • career progression
  • benefits
  • personal growth
  • financial security
  • invest
  • career milestones
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