Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?
Nowadays there are some people
prefer
to do part-time Correct pronoun usage
who prefer
jobs
rather than full-time jobs
. Some people think that it affects positively, whereas others believe that it is not good for the future. I partially agree with having temporary work.
Obviously, there are many reasons why I think it is good
idea. Change the article
a good
Firstly
, we work hard to do what we really want. Employees who have whether temporary or permanent jobs
work to enjoy the rest
time. However
, it is sometimes difficult for workers in a company to rest
completely without holidays. Thus
, it can be better to have part-time jobs
and use the rest
of time
to do what they want. Correct article usage
the time
Furthermore
, they can research during using the rest
of months
. There are many people who wonder what they want to do surely. Correct article usage
the months
For example
, if someone has temporary
Add an article
a temporary
the temporary
job
for few
Correct article usage
a few
months
and use rest
months
for discovering one’s hidden talents and future dream job
, they will consider job
opportunities about what they want.
Nevertheless
, there are also
demerits of having temporary jobs
. First
of all, it can be hard when emergency situations appear. For instance
, if emergency circumstances such
as sickness, financial problems or accidents occur, they may borrow loan
from a bank. Correct article usage
a loan
Besides
, almost workers
who have part-time Correct quantifier usage
all workers
jobs
earn less money than full-time job
employees. Thus
, it will be also
hard to save Add an article
a deposit
the deposit
deposit
. Fix the agreement mistake
deposits
In addition
, temporary working is unsafety. Workers can be fired whenever and the quantity of income can be changed according to employers and each years
.
In conclusion, Change to a singular noun
year
although
having temporary jobs
for few
Correct article usage
a few
months
and use
the Wrong verb form
using
rest
time for doing activities what they want can be better, it will be hard for emergency situations and not safe for the future.Submitted by hongpepe124 on
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