A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jessy,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. It's been a while since our Linking Words
last
road trip Linking Words
in
Alaska. I am so excited to hear that you are interested in camping. Since it will be your Change preposition
to
first
time for go camping, I want to share Linking Words
you
some tips and tricks in order to have a great trip!
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with you
First
of all, I believe that you would love a camping holiday, as there are a lot of Linking Words
activites
for you and your families. Correct your spelling
activities
For example
, you can spend your time together Linking Words
for
hiking around the campsite. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, you can go cycling and enjoy the beautiful scenic view. Linking Words
However
, there are Linking Words
also
some possible drawbacks of sleeping in tents. Linking Words
Firstly
, please do not leave your valuable stuff in the tent when you are out. That's because it may Linking Words
loss
. Replace the word
lose
Secondly
, some areas are the home of wildlife, Linking Words
therefore
all food should be kept in the storage to protect them from animals. Importantly, you should be careful Linking Words
from
some insects that have poison.
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with
Last
but not least, if you are decided where to go, please let me know. I would like to join your trip Linking Words
in
Change preposition
apply
this
summer.
I Linking Words
cann't
wait to see you!
Cheers,
JoyCorrect your spelling
can't
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite