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It is better to have one true friend than all the acquaintances in the world. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#friend #acquaintances #world
In
this
 world, it is not easy to make a relationship it takes a long time and effort to trust somebody. Even though acquaintances or friends both are necessary to our life.
First
, one acquaintance is not enough because in
this
 life you need a lot of people to communicate and get benefit from them Add to Impossible one buddy can know everything in
this
 world. But the partner who can you trust and you can share any mistakes or sly ideas with him will not let you down or reveal your secrets
besides
 he will support you
also
 you feel reassured because of the mutual trust and will not judge me.
Second
, the other people you can not show them the same things like what you do with a friend and have faith in them
however
 you can ask for any advice
on the other hand
 gaining experience from professionals and smart people, they are considered pioneers in their major, and you can benefit from their knowledge. in the
last
 point, we must live with others for mutual benefit.
In addition
, a good relationship with a partner is worth and the relation will not change under any circumstances you have each other is lifelong.
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