Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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issue of separate or mixed
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schools
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since schools
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appeared. I hope in modern times that intelligent people
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of the importance of that question. A lot of people want to know how schools formation
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on
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identity development and
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education quality. The
folowers
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followers
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view
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the world.
That is
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educational
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. It would be developing both
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of
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specialities
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a religious look on the world. God created man and women to be different and it is against God`s will
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two
genders
. The other part of the society has another opinion and considers mixed school as a preferable form of education. Pupils of both
genders
take benefits from
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interaction with each other as they explore another
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.
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future family life communicating to
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opposite sex. Five grades I attended a special football class of a school where there were no
girls
. We behaved ourselves in
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boyish manner, talked tough and often
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. As soon as I am concerned, we felt
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of
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calmness and mildness and when they were included in the class` list we
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relieved and became kinder and more well-balanced. For
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personally separate study does not allow
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essential things about opposite sex way of thinking and
thus
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of the identity. In my humble opinion, dividing
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girls
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shools
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not
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only
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way of organizing education but an evil that seriously diminishes people`s chances to understand each other.
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  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
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