some people think watching sports in one's free time is just waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this sentence ?

As technology has advanced a wider array of programmes are commenced to be watched, and sports are not an exception. A plethora of individuals
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to believe that
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consumption of spare hours as it is useless - while some members of society, as well as I, comment that it does make
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sense
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highly interesting and thought-provoking dilemma. Personally, I absolutely frown on the idea that watching sport translations goes in vain. The
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reason is that by
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some techniques used by professionals, either on the peach, a stadion and courts or in front of
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,
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sportsmen learn how to play a particular game. The same idea can be
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Wimbledon
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tournament, he or she will aware of how points are counted. The secondary reason relates to
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convenience
, meaning that via the Internet or the rest devises
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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