Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you. Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.

Dear Sarah, I'm writing
this
letter because my English teacher
Mr.
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Oliveira, has told me that you, like me, love to write letters and he thinks we could be friends. When he said it, I was so excited because nowadays, it is hard to find a penfriend. Let me introduce myself, my name is Raquel, I'm 19. I've been living here, in New York, since the college in account starts, so there are no more than four months. Before that, I only lived in Brazil and
this
is my
first
experience in a foreign country. I share an apartment with a Chinese girl, who
also
studies accountancy but in a different period than me. As I have no friends in
this
city yet, in my spare time I enjoy watching TV, making video calls to my family, and
also
cooking my own meal. I love carrot cake and pasta. I must confess that living away from my family has been a challenge. I have some curiosity about you, so please, tell me about you, whom do you live with? what do you like to do in your free time? And how frequently do you think we can exchange letters? I hope to hear from you soon. With love, Raquel.
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