A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with reference to your request to provide contributions from the readers for an article called “The

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that influenced you” for your magazine and I would like to take

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opportunity and provide details on the

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that influenced me. My name is Farhana Jabeen and I am a regular reader of your magazine. The

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I would like to share is named “Rich Dad Poor Dad” by Robert Kiyosaki. It emphasises financial liabilities and assets and how to make money work for us rather than working for money.

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was just a part of my research project

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pursuing my degree in finance.

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, it provided me with important advice on accounting, investment techniques and understanding of the market, which influenced me to invest in real estate and earn profits.

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, I personally believe that

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likely has the potential to influence every individual who is seeking ways and suggestions with respect to investment and earning effective returns

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offering financial stability and ways to effectively use their resources. Being able to read

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on investment will definitely have an influence on various age groups. I hope

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information

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be sufficient for

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you to include

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in your article. Should you require any

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details, please let me know. Yours faithfully, Farhana Jabeen

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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