Many young people today know more about international pop or movie stars than about famous people in the history of their own country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?

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Nowadays, youth are more
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interested
in well known foreign celebrities compared to their own country’s historical figures. There are numerous reasons as to why
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is happening and steps could be taken to develop interest among the young to read more about their own history. I consider that
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is mainly due to increased usage of the internet and
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smart phones
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. In fact,watching internationally famous movies and songs is trendy among these age groups.
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constant exposure to celebrities'
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keeps teenagers informed of even unimportant details of their life and personality.
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subject about international famous celebrities is mainly discussed in friend’s gatherings and meetings and one who does not have information about it may be called stupid. There are some ways to aid youth to become familiar more with their historical artists.
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system has a vital role in training and nurturing children in society,they have to instruct the students about historical national icons. Meanwhile,since
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of Of Social media
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as T.Vprograms,advertisements and social applications are prevalent among them, authorities should choose a policy
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as playing the historical songs on television or historical movies in cinema
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making films of their biography in order to make youth be familiar with their own historical famous artists by these mentioned tools.
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,families must bring up their children by illustrating their own culture to them and
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them to find out their
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historical writers and poets. To sum up, as international popular artists are more prosperous and well known among
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generation, we have to tackle
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issue
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the help of
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system ; authorities should provide its infrastructure,
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the role of parents cannot be neglected.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pervasive
  • Globalized media
  • Social media platforms
  • Contemporary culture
  • Glamorous
  • Educational curriculum
  • Multimedia resources
  • National pride
  • Exhibitions
  • Engaging storytelling
  • Interactive apps
  • Historical figures
  • Narratives
  • Celebrations
  • Underemphasizing
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