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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#meat #diet
In the globalized world, the keen desire of human beings is to have
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 and healthy lifestyle. As it is believed by
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 that there
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such
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no requirements of flesh in order to become fit and fine since plant
base
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foods
 have
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 nutrients which present in
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foods
. I firmly accord with the given notion and the upcoming paragraphs will shed the light on my agreement in more detail. Analysing the statement and explaining
further
 the
first
 and foremost thing to be in
this
 favour is that vitamins and proteins are the main
objective
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 of a fine
diet
 and all these nutrients are in
abundun
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abundance
abundant
 in the vegetarian
diet
, as an outcome the individuals are not only able to enjoy the fresh but
also
 the healthy
diet
 as well from plant
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foods
. Another striking factor in
this
 regard is that some
funas
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funds
fun as
 are already suffering from myriad diseases
thus
 by feeding on them major health issues can be observed by the people. To epitome, a survey, which was monitored by the department of health in 2018, that the life cycle of the inhabitants who preferred to eat meat was 70
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 less
comparitively
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comparatively
 to vegetarian masses. Probing ahead, another underlying reason stems behind the fact
that
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is
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against the etiquette of many religions to use
the
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diet
 which
are
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 based on animals as it is not considered under
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mortality.
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, in
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Hindu
Mythology
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 the involvement of animals for
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food purposes is considered
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an injustice. To infer, after the deliberation aforementioned above, it can be said that
although
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 sustenances
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 their own importance in
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 of
fine
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diet
, yet I personally ponder that because of the presence of every
nutrients
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 in vegetarian
foods
, everyone should become vegetarian.
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