A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with reference to your request to provide public feedback regarding your company's sponsorship proposal. The budget allocated to a sports
team
would definitely assist the
team
to take training from a highly qualified professional to prepare them for their upcoming competitions.
In addition
to
this
, they can utilise the capital to purchase a few necessary types of equipment as most of the children lack financial stability.
Although
the money seems beneficial to the
team
, it can
also
be advantageous if the open-air concerts are organised.
This
will boost the morale of local residents along with bringing the public together due to their love for music. In my opinion, the company sponsoring the local sports
team
in current situations sounds fair as they lack the required assistance and resources to represent our society. Hope
this
feedback would be helpful. Should you require any
further
details, please let me know. Yours faithfully, Farhana Jabeen
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  • sportsmanship
  • fosters
  • cultivates
  • talents
  • accessible
  • cultural entertainment
  • boosts
  • tourism
  • temporary employment opportunities
  • patron of the arts
  • community engagement
  • long-term impact
  • economic benefits
  • alternating support
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