Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, a group of people, argue that
women
are equally important as men and can perform well in the field of defence systems. In my
opinion
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this
is positive thinking and
women
are able to handle tasks better. the following essay state points to support my view.
Firstly
, In
this
modern
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world
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everyone is getting equal qualifications and skill training, which were not in the previous era.
As a
result
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women
are getting good knowledge and they are aware of social changes.
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they are even participating in sports activities from childhood, which in turn increases their physical stamina. By considering
this
, we can say that there will not be any negative impact on the country, if we select ladies in the country major field.
for example
in India special training are there for the ladies, who wish to join the defence field.
this
encourages and helps them to perform well in the task.
Secondly
, it has been observed that females have more capacity to bear the pain and emotions than men.
Hence
they can stand as strong, even in critical situations like war, fight or political issues.
For instance
, a survey conducted in Kerala by the state authority, reveals that
women
can analyse a situation without mixing their emotions and can take better decisions. In conclusion, in my opinion, these days
women
have changed a lot in all the fields and achieved good heights so considering all
this
it is good to consider them in the fields like army, navy and air force.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender equality
  • combat roles
  • physical prowess
  • stamina
  • dynamics
  • cohesion
  • resilience
  • integration
  • gender disparities
  • morale
  • recruitment
  • retention
  • biological differences
  • stereotypes
  • feminism
  • glass ceiling
  • break barriers
  • pioneer
  • groundbreaking
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