The government spends about 220 million pounds a year supporting museums and art galleries in the UK, and a similar amount subsidising the visual and performing arts. This is a huge sum to spend on minority interests, and the money would be better spent on more important things. It should be up to people who enjoy cultural attractions to pay for them. What are your views ?

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rather than the
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sectors as well as museums, galleries, visual and performing
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is sizable expenses. Since that someone would say that those amounts should pay by the users. In my point of view, the government should
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cultural activities for national education and
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in technology and foreign
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language for
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century. Cantonese opera, which
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by local language with traditional handmade
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and props. It is unique. Aside
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, Uniqueness
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and history attracts local people and tourists
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the
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events. The government provides funding for
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to hold
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museum of visual
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at HK, The Louvre at Prance. Visitors pay the ticket to enjoy activities while
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around the city,
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it boosts up retail industries as well.
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of tourists increased, whereas high demand
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market. In conclusion, cultural activities should
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to every citizen to enhance their sense of belongings to their country.
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in cultural and artistic life could
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