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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart compares
people
's preferred
way
 of buying and drinking
coffee
 and tea in five different Australian
cities
. It is clear that the habit of going to a
cafe
 for buying and drinking was the primary
way
 for
people
 to purchase
coffee
 and tea in
last
 month while buying fresh
coffee
 seems to be the
way
 not as popular as going to a
cafe
 in the five different
cities
.
However
, in Adelaide the number of
people
 going to a
cafe
 was fewer nearly 1% than
people
 who choose to buy instant
coffee
, compared to the other four
cities
 where
people
 more preferred to go to a
cafe
, the number of
people
 who went to a
cafe
 all reached above 55%.
By contrast
, the figure for
people
 buying fresh
coffee
 was the lowest in all five
cities
, with below 45% of
people
 choosing to do
in
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 that
way
. The number of
people
 buying instant
coffee
 in
cities
 was almost the middle one between buying fresh
coffee
 and going to a
cafe
, except Adelaide, with nearly 45% to 55% of
people
 choosing to purchase instant
coffee
 in
last
 month.
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