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In the past, school children usually learnt by listening to their teacher and by studying their books. Nowadays, many school children learn by using technology in the classroom instead. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Introduction
Pham Anh Tuan Nguyen
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Ved Bellahøj Syd 13A,
Copenhagen
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,
Denmark
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+45 50389313 │[email protected]
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EDUCATION
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Master
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 of
Science
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 in Public
Health
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 09
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2018-08
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2020
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University
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 of Southern
Denmark
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• Danish State
Scholarship
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 (2018-2020)
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Doctor of Medicine Odonto-Maxillo-Stomatology 09
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2008-07
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2014
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Can Tho
University
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 of Medicine and Pharmacy, Vietnam
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•
Scholarship
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 for outstanding academic achievements (2012-2014)
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CAREER RELATED
SKILLS
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 (including any technical
skills
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)
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• Strong analytical and
research
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skills
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 including
literature
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review
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, systematic
review
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 and scientific writing.
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• Proficient in statistical software including Stata, Microsoft Excel.
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• Ability to work independently and collaboratively in a
research
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team
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 with diverse backgrounds effectively.
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WORK EXPERIENCE
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Medical Advisor
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StepUp
Health
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 Solution,
Copenhagen
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 03
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2021 – 12
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2021
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• Collaborated in a
cross functional
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team
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 and took part in the developmental phases of a chest wearable device that measures vital parameters and detects abnormal breathing patterns to help physicians make more accurate decisions and efficacious treatments.
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• Conducted scientific
tasks
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 including reviewing
literature
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 and scientific reports to identify up-to-date physiological features that are vital when monitoring patients with chronic pulmonary diseases (COPD, pneumonia, asthma) that could be integrated
to
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 our medical device.
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• Conveyed scientific findings into explicit information, presented findings to the design and engineering
team
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, and suggest improvements in product development based on these findings.
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• Contacted
to
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apply
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potential organizations, academic institutions and professionals that have
interest
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an interest
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with
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in
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 our business and conducted interviews with international COPD physicians about product features,
ask
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asking
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 for
feedbacks
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feedback
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 and suggestions for improvement of products.
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• Wrote and revised applications to national and international potential grants and funding
programs
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.
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Research
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 Assistant intern & academic instructor
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University
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 of Southern
Denmark
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,
Copenhagen
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 09
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2019 – 01
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2020
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• Participated in a systematic
review
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project
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 about
the oral diseases pattern
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the pattern of the oral disease
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 in the maritime industry and be responsible for searching
literature
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 and reports from scientific databases.
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• Extracted relevant information from selected articles and analyzed data to identify disease patterns, associated risk factors and presented the result to the
research
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team
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 through presentations and written reports.
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• Continued the systematic
review
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project
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 as my
master
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 thesis and accomplished with a prominent result and positive feedbacks from the dissertation council.
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• Assisted in teaching
activities
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 and prepared instructive materials for two courses namely “Public
Health
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 in the 21st century” and “Applied Biostatistics”.
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• Organized the orientation
program
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 and social events for more than 200 graduate
students
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 to introduce the campus facilities, learning tips and promote cultural exchange
activities
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 among new
students
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.
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Community
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health
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program
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 manager – Clinical doctor
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Cai Rang medical
center
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centre
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, Can Tho, Vietnam 11
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2014 – 08
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2018
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• Be responsible for the
community
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 dental
health
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program
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 and lead a
team
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 of 7
grassroot
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grassroots
community
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 workers to design school-based
health
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 promotion
programs
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 and implement new dental intervention
programs
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 at 15 primary schools.
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• Supervised operations of
grassroot
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grassroots
 medical
centers
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centres
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 and organized periodic medical examinations
to
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for
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students
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 in Cai Rang district.
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• Provided support to other
community
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programs
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such
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 as occupational
health
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, HIV
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AIDS, Methadone treatment and Vitamin A supplement to pregnant women and children.
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• Performed overall dental treatment, medical examinations and offered professional advice to outpatients in the city.
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VOLUNTEER AND
COMMUNITY
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ACTIVITIES
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Event manager
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Food Sharing
Copenhagen
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,
Copenhagen
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,
Denmark
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 05
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2020 - Now
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• Collaborate with other volunteers to collect vegetables and fruits surplus from partner supermarkets, bakeries to prepare for the weekly Food Sharing event.
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• Lead a
team
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 of 10 volunteers to organize weekly food sharing
event
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 and deliver collected foodstuff free of charge to registered attendants including
students
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 and local inhabitants.
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Social work volunteer
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Kompasset Kirkens Korshær,
Copenhagen
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2020 – 02
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2021
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• Assisted homeless immigrants and refugees at
Copenhagen
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 city in daily
tasks
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 like preparing daily meals, introducing available services and facilities, booking airfares and job search counselling.
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Member
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Toastmaster Esbjerg 01
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2019 – 05
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2020
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• Attended weekly meetings with other members to practice public speaking
skills
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 by making personal speeches or evaluating other speaker’s
speech
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speeches
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 to help them ameliorate their oratory
skill
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.
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Organizer volunteer 19
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2019 – 21
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2019
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Week of
Health
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 and Innovation (WHINN) Conference, Odense,
Denmark
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• Took part in registration
tasks
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, greeting and instructing guests to the conference rooms.
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ACHIEVEMENT
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• Recipient of the Danish Government
scholarship
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 –
University
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 of Southern
Denmark
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I was awarded
Danish
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a Danish
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scholarship
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 including
full
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 tuition waiver and monthly stipends for
two-year
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a two-year
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master
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program
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 at the
University
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 of Southern
Denmark
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 from 2018 – 2020.
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•
Master
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 degree with distinction recognition –
University
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 of Southern
Denmark
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Became the only student (top 1) in the public
health
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master
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 cohort 2018-2020 graduated with the distinction recognition for
outstanding
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the outstanding
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 accomplishment of the talent
program
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 with extra 20 ECTs.
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ACTIVITIES
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 AND PROJECTS
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• Citizen
Science
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project
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 – Aging in Smart city
project
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 02
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2020 - 08
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2020
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o Participated in the Citizen
science
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 course at Southern
Denmark
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University
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 to learn how to conduct
community
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research
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 through
citizen
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a citizen
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science
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 scientific approach.
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o Conducted a
community
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project
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 to investigate how technology can assist senior citizens in
Denmark
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 during the Covid-19 lockdown by engaging 10 elderly participants in an open group discussion.
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•
Health
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 policies and
programs
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 regarding empowerment seafarers 02
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2021 - now
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o
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Collaborate with researchers from Nordic countries in a systematic
review
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 with
research
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tasks
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 regarding
literature
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review
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, qualitative and quantitative data analysis and scientific writing.
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PUBLICATION
Conclusion
•
Health
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 Diabetes among tuberculosis patients and its impact on tuberculosis treatment in South Asia: a systematic
review
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 and meta-analysis - Published on 22
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01
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2021 – Scientific report journal

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