In the past, school children usually learnt by listening to their teacher and by studying their books. Nowadays, many school children learn by using technology in the classroom instead. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Pham Anh Tuan Nguyen Ved Bellahøj Syd 13A,
Copenhagen
,
Denmark
+45 50389313 │[email protected] EDUCATION
Master
of
Science
in Public
Health
09
/
2018-08
/
2020
University
of Southern
Denmark
• Danish State
Scholarship
(2018-2020) Doctor of Medicine Odonto-Maxillo-Stomatology 09
/
2008-07
/
2014 Can Tho
University
of Medicine and Pharmacy, Vietnam •
Scholarship
for outstanding academic achievements (2012-2014) CAREER RELATED
SKILLS
(including any technical
skills
) • Strong analytical and
research
skills
including
literature
review
, systematic
review
and scientific writing. • Proficient in statistical software including Stata, Microsoft Excel. • Ability to work independently and collaboratively in a
research
team
with diverse backgrounds effectively. WORK EXPERIENCE Medical Advisor StepUp
Health
Solution,
Copenhagen
03
/
2021 – 12
/
2021 • Collaborated in a
cross functional
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team
and took part in the developmental phases of a chest wearable device that measures vital parameters and detects abnormal breathing patterns to help physicians make more accurate decisions and efficacious treatments. • Conducted scientific
tasks
including reviewing
literature
and scientific reports to identify up-to-date physiological features that are vital when monitoring patients with chronic pulmonary diseases (COPD, pneumonia, asthma) that could be integrated
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our medical device. • Conveyed scientific findings into explicit information, presented findings to the design and engineering
team
, and suggest improvements in product development based on these findings. • Contacted
to
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potential organizations, academic institutions and professionals that have
interest
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our business and conducted interviews with international COPD physicians about product features,
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for
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and suggestions for improvement of products. • Wrote and revised applications to national and international potential grants and funding
programs
.
Research
Assistant intern & academic instructor
University
of Southern
Denmark
,
Copenhagen
09
/
2019 – 01
/
2020 • Participated in a systematic
review
project
about
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in the maritime industry and be responsible for searching
literature
and reports from scientific databases. • Extracted relevant information from selected articles and analyzed data to identify disease patterns, associated risk factors and presented the result to the
research
team
through presentations and written reports. • Continued the systematic
review
project
as my
master
thesis and accomplished with a prominent result and positive feedbacks from the dissertation council. • Assisted in teaching
activities
and prepared instructive materials for two courses namely “Public
Health
in the 21st century” and “Applied Biostatistics”. • Organized the orientation
program
and social events for more than 200 graduate
students
to introduce the campus facilities, learning tips and promote cultural exchange
activities
among new
students
.
Community
health
program
manager – Clinical doctor Cai Rang medical
center
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, Can Tho, Vietnam 11
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2014 – 08
/
2018 • Be responsible for the
community
dental
health
program
and lead a
team
of 7
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grassroots
community
workers to design school-based
health
promotion
programs
and implement new dental intervention
programs
at 15 primary schools. • Supervised operations of
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and organized periodic medical examinations
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students
in Cai Rang district. • Provided support to other
community
programs
such
as occupational
health
, HIV
/
AIDS, Methadone treatment and Vitamin A supplement to pregnant women and children. • Performed overall dental treatment, medical examinations and offered professional advice to outpatients in the city. VOLUNTEER AND
COMMUNITY
ACTIVITIES
Event manager Food Sharing
Copenhagen
,
Copenhagen
,
Denmark
05
/
2020 - Now • Collaborate with other volunteers to collect vegetables and fruits surplus from partner supermarkets, bakeries to prepare for the weekly Food Sharing event. • Lead a
team
of 10 volunteers to organize weekly food sharing
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and deliver collected foodstuff free of charge to registered attendants including
students
and local inhabitants. Social work volunteer Kompasset Kirkens Korshær,
Copenhagen
08
/
2020 – 02
/
2021 • Assisted homeless immigrants and refugees at
Copenhagen
city in daily
tasks
like preparing daily meals, introducing available services and facilities, booking airfares and job search counselling. Member Toastmaster Esbjerg 01
/
2019 – 05
/
2020 • Attended weekly meetings with other members to practice public speaking
skills
by making personal speeches or evaluating other speaker’s
speech
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to help them ameliorate their oratory
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. Organizer volunteer 19
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2019 – 21
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2019 Week of
Health
and Innovation (WHINN) Conference, Odense,
Denmark
• Took part in registration
tasks
, greeting and instructing guests to the conference rooms. ACHIEVEMENT • Recipient of the Danish Government
scholarship
University
of Southern
Denmark
I was awarded
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scholarship
including
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tuition waiver and monthly stipends for
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master
program
at the
University
of Southern
Denmark
from 2018 – 2020. •
Master
degree with distinction recognition –
University
of Southern
Denmark
Became the only student (top 1) in the public
health
master
cohort 2018-2020 graduated with the distinction recognition for
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accomplishment of the talent
program
with extra 20 ECTs.
ACTIVITIES
AND PROJECTS • Citizen
Science
project
– Aging in Smart city
project
02
/
2020 - 08
/
2020 o Participated in the Citizen
science
course at Southern
Denmark
University
to learn how to conduct
community
research
through
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science
scientific approach. o Conducted a
community
project
to investigate how technology can assist senior citizens in
Denmark
during the Covid-19 lockdown by engaging 10 elderly participants in an open group discussion. •
Health
policies and
programs
regarding empowerment seafarers 02
/
2021 - now
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Collaborate with researchers from Nordic countries in a systematic
review
with
research
tasks
regarding
literature
review
, qualitative and quantitative data analysis and scientific writing. PUBLICATION •
Health
Diabetes among tuberculosis patients and its impact on tuberculosis treatment in South Asia: a systematic
review
and meta-analysis - Published on 22
/
01
/
2021 – Scientific report journal
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