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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore all students should wear school uniform. Do you agree or disagree

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The prime objective of pupils should be on acquiring knowledge rather than showing
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their social affluence.
However
, the notion of wearing the same school dress doesn'
t
 enhance the students' learning experience,
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 it
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doesn't
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 affect their knowledge
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acquisition
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Therefore
, I do not agree with
this
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view
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this
 will be discussed below.
First
 of all, learning in school and what the students are wearing has no direct bearing with each other.
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, there
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 scientific proof to support
this
view
.
Therefore
, having a dress code shouldn'
t
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 to acquire information by
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dependent on how they are being taught in the place of learning and
also
 on individual capability.
This
 can be seen in schools with dress
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 do not all have the same assimilation rate. As
such
, the clothes they wear is not impacted by their learning.
Finally
, the
view
 that learners in the place of learning should be in the same clothes doesn'
t
 hold true. It has been shown from the above discussion that the clothes worn
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 bear on what is learned in class. I
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 agree with the
view
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