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Many people believe that technology mad man more social. To whar extent do you agree or disagree.

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In today’s world,
technology
 has become an important part of
people
.
Also
, we cannot think to live without
technology
. The more we use
technology
, the more we become social and the more we find ourselves lost in the process of using them longer and longer. To start with, the internet has helped
people
 to overcome the barriers coming in long-distance communication between family and
friends
.
Furthermore
, mobile phones have made communication easier and faster.
People
 can easily share important documents and messages.
For example
, in a situation of lockdowns, like during the coronavirus pandemic, due to apps like zoom and facetime, it was very convenient and easy for families to connect with loved ones.
However
, the young generation is extremely affected by the addicted use of
technology
. They are more worried about their followers and
friends
 on various social networking sites rather than not giving their
time
 to their family and
friends
 who are physically present around them.
In addition
, it has come to the knowledge that young
people
 are getting separated from their families because of their social status.
For example
, many
people
 now are addicted to doing video calls with their loved ones living in their hometowns rather than going and visiting them. Nowadays, parents are
also
 too busy with their mobile phones, laptops and forget to spend valuable
time
 with their children.
Hence
, kids are getting affected by them and to comfort themselves they pass their
time
 playing video games or chatting with their
friends
 over Facebook or WhatsApp. To conclude, I want to say that,
technology
 has helped us to experience different life but the same
technology
 has caused us in discovering bad times when used addictively.
Therefore
, I think that it depends on the
people
 in order to lead life happily by setting some limits over the
technology
 like phones, video games, social networking sites or simply wasting our
time
 over them by ignoring.
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