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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,several
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people
 are suggesting that costless social work functions must include since
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highschool
high school
 level because of it help them to initiate to do something for poor people as free and it raising
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their
 relationship with others
also
 they come forward to teach to kids about games.I strongly agree with
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amongst
among
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students
.
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,
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obedient
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 public work and it makes them mentally and physically
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strong since
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 them how to
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interfere
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others
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 in a family or a society.
Moreover
,
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 feature polish the students become an
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amiable
amenable
 or an affable
person
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 in future.
For instance
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,the government enforced it in all schools to do public support
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 of cleaning open places and school surrounded areas alteast in a month.
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 way from the base level of education.
Secondly
,the students can understand the value of friendship with others while they start to do assist in
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society.Though, it
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 for some learners
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initial
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 time,will change their mental
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 in future. Another main part is most of the scholar become
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broad
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their
 long lives if they encourage to start to do something good for other people without
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 any rewards.
In addition
,some social workers started to campaign in school to give
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experiements
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experiments
 to know about the importance of public assistance. In conclusion,
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system
 must deploy in all
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 of schools and the
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government
 must monitor it happens properly in all aspects,
this
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ready to
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 society or a nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • high school programmes
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • improving the neighbourhood
  • teaching sports
  • sense of responsibility
  • empathy
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • college applications
  • job applications
  • positive impact
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