Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects. Other people say this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In
this
modern world, it has become a debatable issue what subject should be added for adults in their studies. As some
people believe that, they should have to Correct word choice
Some
teach
regarding global updates, Wrong verb form
be taught
while
, others consider it completely useless. I will shed light on both these prospects along with
my opinion.
First of all, having global awareness is very crucial for the pupil's
and it should be added to their courses.Because, Change noun form
pupils
this
will help them to gain knowledge regarding every aspect around
the world and eventually, it will help them to grasp their knowledge. Change preposition
of
For instance
, if youths will know all the happening around the world, they will learn so many things through this
.For example
, some will become good businessmen as they will know all the tricks or specific fields in which they will settle the business because of their information. So global news should be included for young one's
.
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ones
On the other hand
, others disagree with this
viewpoint. 'Teenage ' is the time period in which the new generation will choose their preferences regarding their interest in a particular subject and they already have so much burden of their studies; as most of them consider some of the subjects really tough such
as Science and Math.Thus
, adding one more subject particularly the one that is
just a wastage
of time because they don't need to be aware of nature at a young age.
In conclusion, Replace the word
waste
although
adding earth news
will consume some time for students Correct your spelling
Earth News
but
I personally believe that it will enhance their knowledge and will develop a key to Remove the conjunction
apply
learn
about all the happening on the whole Wrong verb form
learning
Earth
.Change preposition
of Earth
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