Museums for many years have been the places of knowledge and cultural exchange. Nowadays there are more and more resources on the Internet and museums will not be needed in the future. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some people believe that
museums
will be closed in the future, as most of the resources are
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the internet and they don't need to attend the
museums
. I disagree with
this
viewpoint, as
museums
are the essential parts of the tourist attractions and they have been for decades.
Museums
are filled with unique histories of other
artifacts
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of the
aincient
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ancient
cultures and people are fond of them. If you want to learn the history of the place or WW2,
museums
is
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the place that you go to. If the
museums
will not be
neded
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needed
in the future, what best places are there to learn about the countries culture?
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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