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In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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Now can achieve anything they try hard enough because now time competition is so high in all countries.if you try
hard
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way
 you take many apologies in future.in my opinion some countries
children
 are often told that they can achieve anything they try hard
this
way
 is advantages
children
 increasing
confidence
 in future but advantages
children
 losing mindlessly. Present time
whole
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 try to achieve anything and they try to all about
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 some countries told the
children
 they can achieve anything they try hard enough.
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 many advantages of
this
way
 like
children
 increasing
confidence
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level
 in future achievements because day by day life increasing
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matter
better
 about anything.example my little cousin was
try
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to
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 many times to RRY exam but he
don't
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 pass
this
 and he losing
confidence
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level
 but some society people and families members say that you try
more hard
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 and you will pass exam .he increasing the
confidence
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pass
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 the exam.other that
way
 increasing the
children
 competition about anything
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 disadvantages of the
way
 especially
children
 losing
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 health because
because
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they set
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 mind about achievements and try hardly more and they took the in mind .example my friend little brother playing football and he was
good
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 player but they
not
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 try other activities in life and he
try
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tries
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 to
more hard
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harder
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 about
this
 game but he
don't
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 achieve and he was losing minty health about
this
 happened In my conclusion tutor and family members set the
children
mind
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 because
some time
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sometimes
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children
 don't achieve some things but they try other ways to achieve anything
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