an essay presenting the pros and cons of teens using social media

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The social
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media
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is a trending thing right now, in the
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twenty
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it has become from a vague point that
people
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used it often to a critical part of our society, especially for
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young
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.Social
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can consume time and it is a great deal of power in most
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’s lives, but is it good or bad? Social
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isn't just for personal connections, it can be
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used for
job
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, network and
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with potential employers.The
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this
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is that social
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is a great tool for social awareness about various things in the platform u can raise funds or post
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help for a human and many other things.There are some creative opportunities and it is a great thing that
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can build
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side
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hustle as
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said earlier you can find a job on
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social
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and be “Influencer”,
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type of
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are the patrons for the younger generation, they follow their life, what they are eating, their clothing etc but is social
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made of only good sides. One of the cons is the Conspiracy theories you can find them across the internet and some of them aren’t even real.Cyberbullying is
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part of the cons
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some guys can't live with bullying all of the time and
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is not good.To sum it up the social
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can be beneficial in the right hands but on
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instagram
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the profiles and reality
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way different and you need to use social
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right and be careful because there are many threats that you can’t see and when you see them
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already late.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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