Overcrowding in cities is often created when people move from rural to urban areas. What are some problems associated with overcrowding? What can governments do to prevent this issue?

Since communities have migrated from rural to urban
areas
, overcrowding has become continuous in big cities.
This
pattern has resulted in the increase of diseases, limited housing
space
, reduced green spaces and
services
overuse. Lately, governments have not planned solutions to these issues, but they should develop some strategies in order to prevent
this
problem. It has been observed that around the world, the population from rural
areas
have decreased. Being explained by the huge percentage of society moving to the city.
However
urban
areas
have not been prepared for these increases in population,
therefore
, people started to overcrowd. Having effects on the increase of diseases. As was observed
last
year during quarantine, families that lived in a small
space
, close to other families got the danger of being infected by the coronavirus easily, than ones which lived apart from others. Another issue related to overcrowding is the limited housing
space
for each family. As Japan's construction system, every person has available 15 square meters for his living
otherwise
this
country would not have enough area for 10 million people.
On the other hand
, it has been demonstrated that in order to have a good life quality, communities should have at least 5 square meters of parks and green zones per habitant,
therefore
in order to overcrowding these
areas
needs to be reduced so cities can accomplish more living
space
. Another issue is that most cities
services
systems don't count with the capacity to supply a big amount of users. Having an effect on the lack of
services
such
as water, gas and electricity, causing difficulties to the population. Dubai city is recognized for its luxury but is a place that requires a lot of water that they don't have to supply their people, caused by the overcrowding from the
last
10 years. As a solution collected from cases all around the world, is that governments should make rural spaces attractive and good places for living with opportunities and stability for the purpose to guarantee that these zones remain with a high number of residents and avoid overcrowding, which is observed, that causes a huge amount of problems for society. In conclusion, if the government don't manage to overcrowd rapidly it will become a problem with difficult solutions. Risking health, the economy and primary living
services
such
as water and gas. So
this
issue must become important to the city and
consequently
guarantee stability and well being.
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