Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intillegent than humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

S It is thought by some scientists that artificial
intelligence
will shortly surpass human’s
intelligence
in the future.In fact, I completely disagree with
this
viewpoint for two reasons.
First
and foremost,
computers
were created by scientists.The level of
intelligence
of
computers
can be controlled by creators,
thus
it is impossible that AI will exceed
humans
. On top of that ,
computers
are tools to users in which the users have the
ability
to command the robots .
Therefore
it is up to the people to control
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artificial
intelligence
.If the
humans
inactivate the AI it would be impossible for the robots to perform their tasks . .
For instance
, driverless cars have the
ability
to take people to their destinations but if
humans
disabled the engine
then
the automatic cars would not start to function.
In addition
,
computers
are not able to respond to unprecedented situations.
This
is because their
intelligence
is limited. On top of
that
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they do not have emotional
intelligence
and not be able to evaluate
one’’s
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emotion
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. Take
for example
is
online
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class.
Although
, computer technology is efficient and faster to deliver lessons to
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young learners
;
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but
this
is not an indication that the learners completely understand the lessons. In fact, computer technology has no
ability
to go down to
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of a student. Unlike
humans
, they are capable to explain lessons
in
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low
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a low
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or high
level
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.
In addition
, AI is not always reliable , they are just a by-product of
humans
. In conclusion, I disagree that artificial
intelligence
will surpass
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humankind
intelligence
in the coming future as
humans
can control
computers
. Not only do
humans
design the robots but
also
they have the
ability
to understand emotions like
such
a young learner
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