In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining. What's the reasons? How to solve this issue?

Nowadays, plants and
animals
population is reduced remarkably. Today people are living in
money-
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first
era, they cut down
trees
,
fire
the forest and destroy the shelters of
animals
. Lomg times ago, the world we are living
now
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is full of
trees
,water and provides many places for any kind of creatures. But when the years are passed, human beings who are facing
fanicial
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financial
problems try to make money
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in the right way. They steal the teaks , kill
animals
for their ivory, fur and leather, and
then
sell them to black markets. In
this
way, the counts of
trees
are falling down year by year significantly and we are now suffering the consequences for
this
case
such
as Global warming and UV light because of ozone layer damage. Because of continuously decreasing numbers of
trees
,
animals
and wildlife difficult to live in a regular place. They have to move from place to place where the plants and rivers are nearby.
However
, some die from starvation and some die by people who are coming down to cut the
trees
. But the main reason is the hunters and fashionholics who are deadly to buy leather bags and fur coats for their pride and unique
fasion
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fashion
fusion
.
That is
ridiculous. I cannot even think about how can they wear those that can get only by killing other creatures for their standards. Sometimes, villagers make
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by themselves to get firewoods for their agriculture and cooking.Forest
fire
is
also
the main reason for declining of
animals
.
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,
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year 2020, there is a super big
fire
in Australia's jungle and thousands of living died in the
fire
. In my opinion, the deappreance of some species that may be plants or livings are
also
started by the humans' greed and most uneducated villagers. So we need to plan some education programmes for the villages and
also
make to strict the security and guard the forests to prevent from stealing.
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  • deforestation
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  • greenhouse gas emissions
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  • overexploitation
  • invasive species
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