The tables below give information about sales o f Fairtrade* - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales o f Fairtrade* - labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two tables below compare the
money
people spent in
five
European nations on
coffee
and
bananas
over a period of 5 years, which are labelled with
Fairtrade
, a category of food produced
from
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developing countries.
It is clear that
Switzerland
cost
the highest amount of
money
on
bananas
among the
five
countries during the
five
years.
However
, the highest ranking country of
money
spent on
Fairtrade
coffee
was changed from
Switzerland
to the
UK
. In 1999,
Switzerland
cost
3
million
euros for buying
Fairtrade
coffee
, followed by Denmark and the
UK
with 1.8 and 1.5
million
respectively.
However
,
Switzerland
only increased
3
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million
for
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purchasing
coffee
during the
five
years, compared to the sales in Britain rose dramatically from 1.5
million
to 20
million
. For Denmark, Belgium and Sweden, the
money
they
cost
on
coffee
was stable with a little rise of no more than 0.7
million
. Moving to the sales of
bananas
, it is obvious that
Switzerland
consumed the largest number of
Fairtrade
-labelled
bananas
that they
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cost
15
million
in 1999 and 47
million
in 2004, which is well over
than
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any other country.
Also
, both
UK
and Belgium saw an increase in expenditure on
bananas
, from 1
million
to 5.5
million
in the
UK
and from 0.6
million
to 4
million
in Belgium.
On the contrary
, there was a decrease selling of
Fairtrade
bananas
in Sweden and Denmark, which had fallen
approximately
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1
million
euros.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, five, coffee, bananas, fairtrade, switzerland, cost, uk, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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