Some people believe that salary is the most important think in a job. Others say that the job itself is most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

Nowadays numerous people wonder what the most crucial aspect of a career is. Some people think that it is income, whereas others believe that the most important is the

job

itself. I contend that

although

salary is vital, opportunities and duty are the most important thing. Obviously, there is the main reason why income is important. We need enough money to live

comfortable

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comfortably

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. Numerous employees work hard for paying

fees

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the fees

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of

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for

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accommodation,

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clothes

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cloths

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clothes

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and food.

For example

, if there is a family which has

a single-income parents

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single-income parents

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,

father

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the father

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of

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or

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mother

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the mother

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must make their living from hard

laboring

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labour

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.

Besides

, people spend money

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to enjoy

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enjoy

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enjoying

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their leisure time

such

as reading books or watching movies.

Thus

, it is not vital the responsibility of duty more than making much money.

Nevertheless

, I think that other aspects of a

job

is

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are

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more crucial.

Firstly

, it is for promotion. Workers can face enormous opportunities for promotion in careers and they grow themselves by suffering difficulties and feeling proud with accomplishment.

Furthermore

, it is for

responsibility

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the responsibility

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of a

job

.

For instance

, many firefighters, policers and soldiers work for a sense of duty. They value

job

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the job

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itself not for

salary

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a salary

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. In conclusion,

although

salary is

important

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an important

the important

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thing for living affordable, promotion and responsibility are the most vital points of a

job

.

Therefore

, it is different

depends

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depending

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on workers but I think that other aspects of a career

is

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are

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bigger than income.