The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years,
traffic
problems are more and more. And some people
believe that the most effective method to solve this
issue
a
suburbanization or Remove the article
apply
push
Wrong verb form
pushing
people
to leave the cities. I am totally disagree
with Change the verb form
totally disagree
this
statement. And in this
essay
I will highlight the consequences and Add a comma
,essay
another suitable variants
to solve Replace the adjective
another suitable variant
other suitable variants
this
issue
.
At first
, it can lead a communication and service problems. Usually distance
between cities and villages are far, and due to Add an article
the distance
this
some services can be worse than Add a comma
,this
cities
. Change preposition
in cities
For example
, health caring, education, etc. services can not be better than megapolises. These reasons are play
Change the verb form
are playing
main
role in moving to the city decision. If Change the article
the main
government
wants to solve the Add an article
the government
traffic
problem by restriction
to move to the city , they should create convenient inhabitation for villagers.
The Replace the word
restricting
second
reason why I am not agree
with Change the verb form
do not agree
this
solution is that we already have a better and more effective solutions
Correct the article-noun agreement
better and more effective solutions
a better and more effective solution
of
Change preposition
to
this
problem. The traffic
and transport
problem’s reason is not a present quantity of transport
, problem
is in Add an article
the problem
a
increasing of Change the article
an
a transports
on the road. Correct the article-noun agreement
transport
For instance
, scientists of a
USA made Correct article usage
the
a
research, where has been developed that, if Remove the article
apply
government
has Add an article
the government
expand
Change the verb form
expanded
a roads
after 1 month there would be Correct the article-noun agreement
roads
a road
traffic
jams again. The reason for this
is increase
in Add an article
an increase
the increase
number
of cars. To solve Change the article
a number
the number
this
issue
many urbanists suggesting, to improve public transport
systems, such
as tram, bus, metro, etc. And I am agree
with them. In Change the verb form
agree
city
with Add an article
a city
good
developed and planned public Change the adjective
well
transport
people
do not need any own transport
,
because they can arrive by public Remove the comma
apply
transport
. For example
, for transport
10 people
from Add an article
the place
place
a to place b in average needed 5 cars, Add a comma
,place
however
by Add a comma
,however
bus
we can use only 1 bus which can Add a comma
,bus
transport
over 20 people
. So it is decrease number of cars in the car flow.
To sum up, in my point of
view Change preposition
apply
government
should solve the Correct article usage
the government
traffic
issue
with another more efficient method, and should not limit a
urbanization process.Correct article usage
the
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