The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years,
traffic
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problems are more and more. And some
people
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believe that the most effective method to solve
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issue
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suburbanization or
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people
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to leave the cities. I
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with
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to solve
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issue
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. At
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, it can lead a communication and service problems. Usually
distance
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between cities and villages are far, and due to
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this
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some services can be worse than
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in cities
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.
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main
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role in moving to the city decision. If
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the government
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wants to solve the
traffic
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problem by
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to move to the city , they should create convenient inhabitation for villagers. The
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reason why I
am not agree
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with
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solution is that we already have
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better and more effective solutions
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of
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this
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problem. The
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and
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problem’s reason is not a present quantity of
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,
problem
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the problem
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is in
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increasing of
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transport
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on the road.
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USA made
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research, where has been developed that, if
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has
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a roads
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roads
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after 1 month there would be
traffic
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jams again. The reason for
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is
increase
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in
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of cars. To solve
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issue
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many urbanists suggesting, to improve public
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systems,
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as tram, bus, metro, etc. And I
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with them. In
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a city
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with
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developed and planned public
transport
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people
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do not need any own
transport
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,
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because they can arrive by public
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, for
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10
people
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from
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the place
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place
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a to place b in average needed 5 cars,
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however
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by
bus
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we can use only 1 bus which can
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over 20
people
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. So it is decrease number of cars in the car flow. To sum up, in my point
of
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apply
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view
government
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the government
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should solve the
traffic
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issue
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with another more efficient method, and should not limit
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the
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urbanization process.
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