The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years,
traffic
problems are more and more. And some Use synonyms
people
believe that the most effective method to solve Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
issue
Use synonyms
a
suburbanization or Remove the article
apply
push
Wrong verb form
pushing
people
to leave the cities. I Use synonyms
am totally disagree
with Change the verb form
totally disagree
this
statement. And in Linking Words
this
Linking Words
essay
I will highlight the consequences and Add a comma
,essay
another suitable variants
to solve Replace the adjective
another suitable variant
other suitable variants
this
Linking Words
issue
.
At Use synonyms
first
, it can lead a communication and service problems. Usually Linking Words
distance
between cities and villages are far, and due to Add an article
the distance
Linking Words
this
some services can be worse than Add a comma
,this
cities
. Change preposition
in cities
For example
, health caring, education, etc. services can not be better than megapolises. These reasons Linking Words
are play
Change the verb form
are playing
main
role in moving to the city decision. If Change the article
the main
government
wants to solve the Add an article
the government
traffic
problem by Use synonyms
restriction
to move to the city , they should create convenient inhabitation for villagers.
The Replace the word
restricting
second
reason why I Linking Words
am not agree
with Change the verb form
do not agree
this
solution is that we already have Linking Words
a better and more effective solutions
Correct the article-noun agreement
better and more effective solutions
a better and more effective solution
of
Change preposition
to
this
problem. The Linking Words
traffic
and Use synonyms
transport
problem’s reason is not a present quantity of Use synonyms
transport
, Use synonyms
problem
is in Add an article
the problem
a
increasing of Change the article
an
a transports
on the road. Correct the article-noun agreement
transport
For instance
, scientists of Linking Words
a
USA made Correct article usage
the
a
research, where has been developed that, if Remove the article
apply
government
has Add an article
the government
expand
Change the verb form
expanded
a roads
after 1 month there would be Correct the article-noun agreement
roads
a road
traffic
jams again. The reason for Use synonyms
this
is Linking Words
increase
in Add an article
an increase
the increase
number
of cars. To solve Change the article
a number
the number
this
Linking Words
issue
many urbanists suggesting, to improve public Use synonyms
transport
systems, Use synonyms
such
as tram, bus, metro, etc. And I Linking Words
am agree
with them. In Change the verb form
agree
city
with Add an article
a city
good
developed and planned public Change the adjective
well
transport
Use synonyms
people
do not need any own Use synonyms
transport
Use synonyms
,
because they can arrive by public Remove the comma
apply
transport
. Use synonyms
For example
, for Linking Words
transport
10 Use synonyms
people
from Use synonyms
Add an article
the place
place
a to place b in average needed 5 cars, Add a comma
,place
Linking Words
however
by Add a comma
,however
bus
we can use only 1 bus which can Add a comma
,bus
transport
over 20 Use synonyms
people
. So it is decrease number of cars in the car flow.
To sum up, in my point Use synonyms
of
view Change preposition
apply
government
should solve the Correct article usage
the government
traffic
Use synonyms
issue
with another more efficient method, and should not limit Use synonyms
a
urbanization process.Correct article usage
the
Submitted by fandybayevd on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.