The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to discourage people from the suburbs or the countryside from moving to the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years,
traffic
problems are more and more. And some
people
believe that the most effective method to solve
this
issue
a
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suburbanization or
push
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people
to leave the cities. I
am totally disagree
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with
this
statement. And in
this
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I will highlight the consequences and
another suitable variants
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to solve
this
issue
. At
first
, it can lead a communication and service problems. Usually
distance
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the distance
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between cities and villages are far, and due to
this
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,this
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some services can be worse than
cities
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in cities
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.
For example
, health caring, education, etc. services can not be better than megapolises. These reasons
are play
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main
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role in moving to the city decision. If
government
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the government
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wants to solve the
traffic
problem by
restriction
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to move to the city , they should create convenient inhabitation for villagers. The
second
reason why I
am not agree
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do not agree
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with
this
solution is that we already have
a better and more effective solutions
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better and more effective solutions
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of
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this
problem. The
traffic
and
transport
problem’s reason is not a present quantity of
transport
,
problem
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the problem
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is in
a
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an
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increasing of
a transports
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transport
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on the road.
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, scientists of
a
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USA made
a
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research, where has been developed that, if
government
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has
expand
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a roads
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roads
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after 1 month there would be
traffic
jams again. The reason for
this
is
increase
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an increase
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in
number
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a number
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of cars. To solve
this
issue
many urbanists suggesting, to improve public
transport
systems,
such
as tram, bus, metro, etc. And I
am agree
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agree
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with them. In
city
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a city
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with
good
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well
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developed and planned public
transport
people
do not need any own
transport
,
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because they can arrive by public
transport
.
For example
, for
transport
10
people
from
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the place
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place
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a to place b in average needed 5 cars,
however
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by
bus
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we can use only 1 bus which can
transport
over 20
people
. So it is decrease number of cars in the car flow. To sum up, in my point
of
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view
government
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the government
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should solve the
traffic
issue
with another more efficient method, and should not limit
a
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the
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urbanization process.
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