Some people think that technology is now an invaluable study tool for young people. Others, however, believe that it is harmful for the studying process. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today
when we want to learn something
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, when we want to learn something,
information
we need on the subject we want. But when you look back in time the student had to spend Add an article
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I have to mention that it’s definitely more accessible to click the buttons. The technology not just gives
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this
is very efficient due to the fact that in this
way
we can create presentations, documents, projects so the teachers can also
grade us based on our computer skills, which, in
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The technology
helps us evolve, it helps us learn how to synthesize the Correct article usage
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information
in a way
that we can understand it better.
On the other hand
, as we start to depend on the
computers more it’s starting to get harder and harder to go back to the old days, where the only source of knowledge Correct article usage
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books
. We get use
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has its consequences. I am 90% sure that the majority of my generation (including me) won’t be able to find the information
they need for a project,
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books
from the library. And that’s not necessarily a bad thing. But by only getting the information
through one
small screen, we refuse to look around and take the information
we need from the world around us. One
of my teachers has a theory that’s why it’s harder for us to learn how to drive. When we are behind the wheel we need to take the information
from everything around us — the signs, the traffic lights, the cars behind us, the marks on the road…But it is hard for us to do so, because during
all of our lives, all the Add the comma(s)
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information
for us came through one
, compared to the world, small, even tiny, screen.
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balance
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The technology
is the future, and we can’t stop that but we can’t forget the old days, where the main source of Correct article usage
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were
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books
. We have to learn how to do both. For example
, we can do presentations based on research made completely from books
. Or the teachers can give us assignments every now or then
, in which we will only use books
. But this
can’t happen if the educational systems don’t change. Because at the end of the day students choose the easier way
, which is pressing some buttons.Submitted by galina_gradinarova on
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