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Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive. To what extent do you agree?

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It is believed by some people that
women
 have more patience and they are very quiet and contented as compared to
men
 because they give birth to a
life
 and passes through that pain and after that they adjust their dreams for their family. In my opinion, I agree with
this
 and in
further
 ,paragraphs I will describe the same.
Firstly
, if we compare
men
 and
women
 according to their character we will find that
men
 are responsible, strong but they do not have that much patience like the
women
 have.
Moreover
, if we put
men
 in place of
women
 and expect them to do all those things which
women
 do in their daily
life
, we can see that
men
 become more aggressive and frustrated and it is not possible for them to do all those things in their whole
life
.
For instance
, my friend's wife got injured and was on complete bed rest
then
 her husband had to do all the household tasks along with taking care of children and
at
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 the end, he felt very tired and showed anger as he was not able to manage all the things.
On the other hand
, the woman gives birth to a child. She nurtures him with her love and care and adjusts all her
life
 behind him and her family. She does everything for her family's happiness and when she sees their happy faces, she forgets her pains and feels happy and peaceful. They live their
life
 with the thought of nurturing others and that's why they are calmer than
men
. In conclusion,
women
 develop the behaviour to keep calm and happy and adjust in every situation and these are the reasons they are not as aggressive as
men
.
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