The picture given shows the manufacturing process of bricks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The linear
process
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chart illustrates
that
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various seven steps
occurring
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in
production
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the production
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process
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of
bricks
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, the seven steps are digging
clay
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, separating the metal grid, producing
bricks
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, heating , cooling , packaging and delivering . the chart depicts that
process
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is starting with
digging
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the digging
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of
clay
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and ending with packaging and delivering the product the produced
bricks
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are heated at a particular temperature to attend the
last
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stage of
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process
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the process
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that is
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delivering the
bricks
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to market. By using the machinery the
clay
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is
digged
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dug
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out and the metal grids are crunched with the help of
roller
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a roller
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.consistently,with
suffetient
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sufficient
amount of sand and water are added to the
grinded
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ground
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clay
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.
bricks
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can be extracted by two methods they are by moulding the
clay
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into
required
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the required
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shape and using
wire
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a wire
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cutter to cut the
bricks
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into
desired
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the desired
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shape. The moulded
bricks
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are kept into an
advance
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machinery
that is
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drying oven for
couple
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a couple
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of days after that they are heated at a moderate to high temperature of 200 degrees to 1300 degrees celsius and consistently for 2 to 3 days they are kept under
cooling
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the cooling
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chamber and the product is packed and delivered.
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