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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace everyday. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

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Advancement in technology has made
work
vey
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very
 easy because
of
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that
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apply
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people
 can
work
 anywhere.
Although
, it is sometimes thought working from
home
 is better than to go at the office, others believe that
employees
 should go
at
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 the workplace. In my
opinion
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 I considered that there are both positives and
negetive
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negative
negatives
 effects. There are several reasons why it is good for
employees
 to
work
 from
home
. The
first
 and foremost important thing is that saving
time
. Workers do not need to travel for
work
, so they can save
time
 for themselves and family.
In addition
,
people
 can do more than one
work
 at a
time
 through the internet.
Hence
, it provides tremendous benefits. Another point to consider is that working from
home
 is better for
employees
 means that they have a chance to
work
 in any corner of the world.
For instance
, in one survey has conducted in the UK,
people
 are choosing to
work
 abroad and they need to go there, but working from
home
 has given an option to
employees
 to
work
 in foreign without travelling.
Moreover
, there are many applications available online, they can
work
 from those applications
instead
 of travelling to a workplace.
On the other hand
, working from
home
 has some demerits
also
.
Firstly
,
people
 do not
work
 on
time
, as employers are not present with them to look after their
work
.
Secondly
, workers can not understand their colleagues when they are working in a team, because they never meet them.
Finally
, employers can not see
employees
 expression and seriousness online for their
work
. In conclusion, working from
home
 has numerous advantages
such
 as spending quality of
time
 with family and can do
work
 any part of their country, not even in their country but across the world. While there are some
also
 disadvantages and it should not neglect.
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